https://youtu.be/CU-5SD9-Z4o
Reflection from Pitch #2:
I
received mostly positive feedback on my last elevator pitch as I was
complimented on my adjustment to previous feedback, pitch, and professionalism.
It seemed to me that my fellow classmates thought I was comfortable in front of
the camera, but this is something that you can always improve. My goal on the
next elevator pitch is to look comfortable and confident, be loud and clear,
and connect the audience to my business idea.
What I Changed:
I
was more specific about the details regarding my solar energy program in order
for the audience to clearly understand the product I am offering. Also, I tried
to appear more confident so customers would be more inclined to consider buying
my product. I believe these minor changes improved my overall pitch and will
give me the best opportunity to interest potential customers into buying this
solar energy program.
Hey James! I completely agree that now is the time to invest in alternative forms of energy, and solar energy is a great choice. Consider marketing your system to a Florida market first before going national since it's where you're located and Florida is (obviously) a perfect place for harvesting solar power. Great job pacing yourself and speaking with conviction!
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